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The Lullaby of Al'Sura - Book 1 Cover blank by kessir The Lullaby of Al'Sura - Book 1 Cover blank by kessir
And Finally, after almost 3 years of waiting and one Book already finished... I present to thee~
*drumrolls* The book cover of the First book of The Lullaby of Al'Sura.

This Cover will be instead of the old cover
, though the old Cover will probably still be put inside the book as welcoming page or whatever it is called XD
I will upload the Cover full with all the Text put on it later because i need you people's opinions on the text ;w; i have no idea what im doing, really!

Edit: Find the Content-filled version here:

Finished Chapters:


Characters, Story and Art are by Cassie R. '10-'13
:iconshadowagentneonn:
Hello kessiR, I am Shadowagentneonn and I'll be critiquing today. Please note I'll be doing this very, very strictly and I'm one of the more harsh ones, but your work has impressed me. Let us start on the character herself: No harsh lines, so that is very good. The soft lines are also thin and kept within well dynamic lengths with no chaotic jerks. Her hair is flown apart, and her expression has a sense of wonder emanating from it. Good job on that part! The eyes are gray. but one can tell they are full of brilliance. Her horns are just full of detail, to every last bit, with roughness and quality that its not just smooth horns. Her clothes are excellent, with an Asian detail to it. The blue just matches with her personality! This brings me to the shading. The shading is quite excellent. The lighting of the fire is nice and warm and provides shading and color. The swirling silk around her makes her seem magical and mystical! This is one good book cover. All those details give her the main spotlight, making the whole world shrink in just on her! Nice impact!

The things you need to improve on:
Let's see... Would help if you added more detail to the fire, it already seems good enough, and the picture of some mystical enchantress sitting down doing some kind of magic is everywhere on Deviantart. But the anthro part made it unique. To judge more on your technique, which kind of tool in your painting program did you use? I'll give it a 5 star for now...(Muhahahaha!)

Nothing much else! Dream on and continue your art! You are doing great!
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Erwanna-Dragony Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful ! The kind of cover that would make me want to pick it up on a bookshelf !
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KY0SU Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beatiful
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Inghelene Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sweet! :D
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