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The Lullaby of Al'Sura - Book 1 Cover SATOR by kessir The Lullaby of Al'Sura - Book 1 Cover SATOR by kessir
Content-filled Version of the Bookcover
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Please note that this isn't the 100% Final version yet.
There's still a few things that need to be worked over before i can print this free of any copyright issues, such as the used Font for the Title. The stone engraved letters will also need a bit of a work over.

I have a major request for all my readers out there: Please read through the Book Content Text and feel absolutely free to suggest any changes in the comments! My best friend and Coworker Caro has been bitching about the long sentences, and i'm also not so well versed with writing summaries XD If ANYONE has any better suggestions, PLEASE let me know!

Also, for the first time Introducing the Logo and the Name of a Studio, which of course for now only exists in digital form, which i formed with my beloved friends :iconchikitwich: and :iconbeti-kot: :heart:. The Studio's name is TriLunis~

Characters, Story and Art are © by Cassie R. '10-'13

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:icontenchi8:
Tenchi8 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I think the contents of the text are just fine, personally. ^^
Like the color blue, I get the impression that it's a deep story.
This looks really good. I'll swing by to read the chapters later when I get a chance.
I'm already reading someone's story at the moment. Great cover art here. :)
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:iconkessir:
kessir Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot for your comments :) Though don't rush into reading the old pages at the moment, theres a reason I put them into the scraps and dont feature them on my main page anymore... I'm recompiling the pages for rerelease, inbetween commissions of which I'm being overflooded with atm... But the rerelease will be much better than the current version, better dialogue and more to the point than before. the original one sort of went nowhere at some points and the things the characters said became discoherent due to changes in the setting.
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:icontenchi8:
Tenchi8 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Your very welcome. ^^
Oh ok. I look forward to it when it gets re-release.
Great works do take time to make. :) 
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CrystalMilevard Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Nothing less from you! I am always crying from happiness when i see your job. Really wish one day to have the honour to meet you and by your work! Love your style!!!!! Thanks for always sharing your great and professional work with us and giving us the inspiration to make stuff so artistic like yours! LOVE UR ART!!!! ^^
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:iconkessir:
kessir Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much ;w; Your words encourage me :3 Maybe some day I will come to athens to visit Chiki, then i'm sure you can tag along XD lmao X3 *hugs*
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:iconcrystalmilevard:
CrystalMilevard Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
I will wait for you! ^^
And actually you and Chiki inspired a lot and now i think my work with the elves will be the best. ^^
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:iconpandeia:
Pandeia Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
vielleicht gleich zu beginn, "a race to whom..." etc, wie wärs mit emphasise?
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:iconkessir:
kessir Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm... "a race that highly emphasises racial purity?" :O Ich bekomm in meinem kopf ausser diesem keinen richtigen anderen satz zusammen XD... aber gute idee, danke!
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:iconpandeia:
Pandeia Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
ja, so hätt ich das auch formuliert :) wenn ich das cover so anseh, kommen mir ganz plötzlich sachen in den sinn, die ich mich vorher nicht geachtet hab: sator erinnert mich an dieses römische palindrom "sator arepo..." und trilunis erinnert mich an tr3slunas, ein album von mike oldfield (dem kerl von tubular bells und moonlight shadow). beabsichtigt?
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:iconkessir:
kessir Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Du wirst lachen, aber der zweite band heisst tatsächlich "Arepo" :3 Voll beabsichtigt, da es genau 5 bände geben wird. Das Sator-Square wird später auch in der Geschichte noch eine rolle spielen XD Aber bis ich dahin komm dauert es noch ein wenig.
Allerdings hab ich von tr3slunas noch nichts gehört. Wir nannten uns TriLunis, da wir zu dritt sind, jeder von uns eine eigene "welt" für sich hat (die geschichten spielen zusammen), und alle in irgendeiner weise von mystizismus und hexenkunst beinflusst oder inspiriert werden (vielleicht kennst du das heidnische zeichen der dreifaltigen göttin? daran ist das Logo auch stark angelehnt). Manchmal sind wir untereinander auch nur ein wenig verrückt, also Looneys X3 (wobei das wort ja eh den gleichen sprachstamm hat...)
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:iconpandeia:
Pandeia Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
klar kenn ich die dreifaltige göttin ;) aber wie kommt latein in deiner welt zustande? o.O naja, die erklärung kommt ja bestimmt mit der zeit x3
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:iconkessir:
kessir Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
jap, erklärung mit der zeit :3
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LittleMissUnholy Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student General Artist
OOOOHHHH!!! It looks so professional! *__*
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gabiemiller Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
maybe substitute the word "begins" in place of one of the "starts" since they're kinda close together?

like "...she slowly starts regaining lost memories and begins to discover..."
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:iconkessir:
kessir Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lmao i never even saw that one XD Thanks gommy~
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:icongabiemiller:
gabiemiller Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013
also Graphic Novel looks like it's scrunched into one word rather than two

i'll be sure to keep an eye out for the first printing!!
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:iconkessir:
kessir Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh i just saw this :O I actually did write it into one word. I kinda didnt look at it anymore after that, thanks for the reminder X3
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SarahSoak Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
I don't think the sentences are too long! As a non-native speaker i can understand them perfectly and i like the style of speech. :)
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Inghelene Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks great dear! :D
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ShadowAgentNeonn Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think this is influenced by Harry Potter, am I correct? (And I critiqued.)
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:iconkessir:
kessir Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know what you mean about the apparent influences by HP and that some things might seem similar in some sense, though i never was basing the story on HP or trying to copy it or get influenced by it. For some reason the hype on HP never really caught me.
But I know its not the most unique of story settings that i've come up with here, however, unique-ness wasn't entirely my goal with this story either. The setting will change in the next book, so no more seemingly HP-setting ripoffs :3

And thank you very much for the nice critique :3
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:iconshadowagentneonn:
ShadowAgentNeonn Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem. Keep on going and realise your dreams.
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Dumpling-Canai Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Would very much buy!

TriLunis- who's the big moon in the gang? XD
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:iconkessir:
kessir Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
TriLunis will be the group of the three of us, as each has a own story which also is heavily connected to the other two. The Big moon is always the one whose story you're currently reading, and the two moons beneath it are like the pillars this one moon is standing on. It can stand on its own, certainly, but its more stable if the two other moons assist it X3
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Tadpole7 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013
The only thing I might change in the text is
 "...at the academy..." rather than "...in the academy...".

Great cover and font choices.
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:iconkessir:
kessir Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh right, thank you X3
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EternaNyx-Art Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm in love with this picture, oh my gosh. :heart:
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LNZart Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I think the book content text is fine as is.  It sums up everything without giving away anything.
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